Wednesday, September 17, 2014

Change Something In the Story

If I could change one thing in this story so far I would make Teddy, Mia's brother live. I don't think Mia would even consider letting go if Teddy lived. Also, I think her decisions would be different.  I really wish Mia would have someone in her family to be living with. She would be able to grieve with Teddy and get through this tragedy together. Adam and her will go separate ways cause he does not understand the extent of what she is going through and he is also overbearing for her. It is very sad when Teddy dies and I just wish he would live. This would change everything in this story because Mia would not be alone and living her own life. Anyway, that is the event I would change in this story and I have said my reasons for that.

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